tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5151203768395758839.post7905520238506883822..comments2023-10-23T08:22:30.923-07:00Comments on Sharon Donovan, Author: Do You Hear What I Hear?Sharon Donovanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14648684299903722373noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5151203768395758839.post-68769748781635814202009-03-28T11:07:00.000-07:002009-03-28T11:07:00.000-07:00Hi Sharon,Great post! I enjoyed the way the sounds...Hi Sharon,<BR/><BR/>Great post! I enjoyed the way the sounds built up and could really feel the on-coming storm.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for the good read!Nancy J. Parrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10107417252662717576noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5151203768395758839.post-77428445133932603802009-03-27T11:24:00.000-07:002009-03-27T11:24:00.000-07:00Sharon, I really enjoyed this, your choice of word...Sharon, I really enjoyed this, your choice of words is amazing. I've rarely met a descriptive word I don't like but - "swoosh" and "undulating" "dank, rot and decay", all send shivers up my spine.<BR/><BR/>You described so much in such great detail in very few words. Beautiful.<BR/>A real gift.Luluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09783860201792277373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5151203768395758839.post-44918708084690937672009-03-25T18:25:00.000-07:002009-03-25T18:25:00.000-07:00I love storms, and you captured the essence of the...I love storms, and you captured the essence of them wonderfully. The odd thing is that quite before the storm, always a little eerie. Wonderful mood piece and a great reminder of the force (and whimsy) of nature.<BR/>~jonJ. M. Strotherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01117770768990691070noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5151203768395758839.post-45616394015092654432009-03-25T16:59:00.000-07:002009-03-25T16:59:00.000-07:00Thanks Christine. I wasn't sur where I was going w...Thanks Christine. I wasn't sur where I was going with it but a raging thunder storm always conjurs up images of thunder and lightning slashing swords in the battle raging through the sky.Sharon Donovanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14648684299903722373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5151203768395758839.post-11342746091839838672009-03-25T16:56:00.000-07:002009-03-25T16:56:00.000-07:00Hi Iain. Thanks. Imagery is important to this clip...Hi Iain. Thanks. Imagery is important to this clip, a glimpse of the coming storm raging through the sky.Sharon Donovanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14648684299903722373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5151203768395758839.post-51320850417422353922009-03-25T16:53:00.000-07:002009-03-25T16:53:00.000-07:00You got it Marsha! It was all about build up to so...You got it Marsha! It was all about build up to something out of our control. We don't know when or where...just that it's coming.Sharon Donovanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14648684299903722373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5151203768395758839.post-82166021849096160382009-03-25T16:50:00.000-07:002009-03-25T16:50:00.000-07:00Thanks Nixy and thanks for creating this writing a...Thanks Nixy and thanks for creating this writing adventure. You inspire us!Sharon Donovanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14648684299903722373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5151203768395758839.post-85645888094573158972009-03-25T10:10:00.000-07:002009-03-25T10:10:00.000-07:00Hello Sharon,This piece had great images. The fury...Hello Sharon,<BR/><BR/>This piece had great images. The fury of mother nature in all it's beauty.<BR/><BR/>Nicely done. :-)Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02993117493106191112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5151203768395758839.post-72792625534198549762009-03-25T04:31:00.000-07:002009-03-25T04:31:00.000-07:00Hi Sharon, I like the rhythm of your description; ...Hi Sharon, I like the rhythm of your description; you use good images and set a definite mood.Iain Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09732449545401433187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5151203768395758839.post-49408745802520249002009-03-25T03:02:00.000-07:002009-03-25T03:02:00.000-07:00I like 'wet air dank'. The combination of words to...I like 'wet air dank'. The combination of words together is powerful. <BR/><BR/>It's great how most of the post is about the approach of the storm. Awesome build-up!Marshahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03315289632435632377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5151203768395758839.post-41818297054075800072009-03-25T01:12:00.000-07:002009-03-25T01:12:00.000-07:00I love the words you've used here, especially the ...I love the words you've used here, especially the line "Faint chimes in the distance, tinkle like shattered glass." Gives a very specific mood with a touch of foreshadowing.<BR/><BR/>Love it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com